Tuesday, August 31, 2004
Robert Duncan, in writing to H.D. during the last two years of her life, sought to connect himself to the generation of Imagism (which was, as Duncan would note in The H.D. Book, "not a lost generation," those writers who came into prominence in Paris in the 1920s, precisely because Imagism had been the last pre-Great War poetic tendency*) to help him craft his own master work, a project that, in The H.D. Book, he repeatedly associates with the major late poems of Pound, Williams and H.D.
Yet Duncan’s own writing from this point onward cannot honestly be said to echo the strategies taken by any of the trio of elder poets to whom he continually returns – there is no Patterson, no Trilogy, no Pisan Cantos, as such. One can read Duncan’s major work, beginning with The Opening of the Field in a couple of different ways. In one, all five books might be read & understood as a single project. In another, the fifteen year hiatus between Bending the Bow & the first volume of Ground Work figures a break – placing the trio of volumes from the sixties & seventies into one group, the two volumes of Ground Work into a second. While that may be a major issue for Duncan scholarship in general, it doesn’t, I think, impact a great deal on this work’s relationship to The H.D. Book as currently available – either in the journals of its original publication nor in the pirated "Frontier Press" edition that pops up periodically on the internet. The H.D. Book as we have it was written almost entirely in the 1960s, prior to the hiatus – and the latest actual reference I can find internally to another publication is 1969. While Duncan is known to have had notes to a third "book," to accompany the two sections already available, there is apparently no such additional manuscript extant. All of which suggests to me that we should focus our concentration on the relationship of the Book to the trio of projects Duncan was writing before and during its composition – The Opening of the Field, Roots and Branches, & Bending the Bow.
Opening was written before Duncan’s correspondence with H.D. got serious. He had sent a few letters earlier, as early as 1950 – a time when his earlier attempts to connect with Pound (a visit to St. Elizabeth’s in 1947, followed by correspondence) had, by Duncan’s own account, become entropic, tapering into silence. The Field, as Duncan called it when he sent Doolittle a copy of the manuscript, was written thus also before Duncan undertook his "study" of the elder poet.
Duncan had been working on this first book of his new unnamed project for some time. Peter O’Leary, in an email, places the first draft of Opening’s initial poem, "Often I am Permitted to Return to a Meadow," as from "a trip to London in 1953." The care with which the volume was not only composed, but prepared for public acceptance, as well as Duncan’s own down playing of his earlier works, suggest the considerable importance that Duncan assigned to this project. Indeed, there was much back and forth over whether to self-publish the book or to place it with a press such as Macmillan – which would ensure a broader readership and force more of a response from the 1960s School of Quietude set. In the end, the book came out from Barney Rosset’s Grove Press, a press that had one foot in the New York trade scene, while the other published the likes of Charles Olson, Paul Blackburn, Henry Miller and William Burroughs.
Within the trio of Opening, Roots & Bow, there exist not one but two long poems – The Structure of Rime & Passages – numbered sequences that might well have been written and published as independent works, much like the Pisan Cantos or Olson’s Maximus. That Duncan never published them that way is telling – the two projects treated independently might well have greatly enhanced Duncan’s reputation and, I believe, Structure’s revolutionary nature – it was in the 1960s the most radical instance of the prose poem in English after William’s Kora in Hell & the works of Gertrude Stein – is more clearly visible when set apart. But Duncan’s view of poetry, much like Duncan’s view of the world, is that it needed to be understood as organic, that there is a structure, larger, more detailed, more complex than we can can derive from details alone. As he will say (writing of Olson) in The H.D. Book, "Structure is not satisfied in the molecule, is not additive; but is fulfilled only in the whole work." If one burning question concerning the American longpoem during its modernist period lay precisely in the crux of the part:whole relationship – with Pound, Williams & even H.D. (tho here we might come back to note differences) all writing numbered works that largely flow one into the other, with Zukofsky envisioned here as the Great Dissenter, at least after the opening six sections of "A, " insisting instead a part:whole relationship that stresses the integrity of the part, Duncan offers instead a third way, reminiscent almost of Whitman’s ongoing growth of Leaves of Grass through perpetual revision across multiple editions. In Opening, Roots & Bow, we find individual named poems commingled with these two long poems to form a continuous writing, a Life Work, to employ Duncan’s phrase (and his caps). It is within this commingled flow that we first find The Structure of Rime. Indeed, the structure of The Field forces us to focus on its critical role. After an initial trio of poems, "Meadow," "The Dance," and "The Law I Love is Major Mover," come the first two sections of Rime. Then follows by no accident "A Poem Slow Beginning," followed in turn by five more sections of Rime.
* Tho one might argue that William Carlos Williams, a late starter as well as The One Who Did Not Move to Europe, did not reach maturity as a poet until the 1920s.
Labels: Robert Duncan
Monday, August 30, 2004
Saturday, August 28, 2004
I'm going to be heading down to San Antonio, Texas for a few days. As always when I travel for work, it's hard to know if I'm going to be able to post (for reasons that have more to do with my laptop than anything else). If I can, I shall. If not, I should return by Thursday.
Friday, August 27, 2004
Francie Shaw is a painter whose work may be best known to this audience through her many book covers for language poets, including volumes by Bob Perelman, Lyn Hejinian & David Bromige (as well as for the first edition of In the American Tree*), though her sets for the San Francisco Poet’s Theater in the 1970s & ‘80s may have been even more awe inspiring. There is in her line a sense of balance & efficacy, a calm confidence, that I think you can find in the written line of many West Coast poets, such as Kit Robinson or Norman Fischer. There is, in fact, a fascinating study yet to be written on the influence of painting & music on Western Langpo, and that study would center on the contributions of the work of Shaw & the Rova Saxophone Quartet.
In Playing Bodies, Shaw and Bob Perelman have extended the possibility of collaboration. Playing Bodies is a book that I don’t think could have been done by collaborators who haven’t been married for 30 years as have Perelman & Shaw. As such, it’s a unique opportuniuty to see & read work contextualized by an almost unfathomable familiarity & intimacy.
There are of course a million ways for any two individuals to collaborate, regardless of the media involved. Shaw began her series of 52 relatively small paintings of blue figures on a white background (in her introduction to the Granary Press edition, Susan Stewart compares Shaw’s paintings to Delft tiles) – their actual size is quite close to what we get in the book. At some point in the process, Perelman began writing responses. It’s not clear that it ever became a true dialog, with Shaw responding in turn to Perelman’s poems – did he ever write ones to which she painted – tho the book has the feel of dialog throughout.
Modeled after toy action figures Shaw had at hand, her paintings involve three recurring actors – a generic dinosaur & two generically gendered humans, one male, one female. In each of the 52 paintings, the dino (who is likewise “of human scale”) is involved or entangled with one figure. The paintings are evenly divided so that the male figure (in a dark oversized suit) appears 26 times, as does the female in a light smock or chemise.
In an afterword, Perelman writes that
In response to my first attempt to write a companion poem, [Shaw] talked about the one that is now #3, telling me that I was just taking the point of view of one of the figures, but that for her both figures formed a single event.It’s true that most of Perelman’s poems occur in the first person, addressed to the second & if an action is referenced, the “I” appears almost always to be the human figure. But in Shaw’s paintings as well, it is the human who almost always appears to be striving. Because the peopled figures were, in Shaw’s word, “bendable” & the dino of a harder plastic, its immobility gives it a sort of monolithic muteness. Her paintings are very much the tale of a Garbo-esque Dino beseeched by longing humans. The humans wrestle, tumble, climb, lift (and are lifted), snuggle & otherwise harass their beloved, but the dino retains a constant posture, regardless of the position into which it is placed. These are, as Shaw notes, not action paintings but “still lifes of three small figures”
But just as these postures mime action, so also they figure attitude & emotion. The human figures are poignant with longing, the dino blasé with diffidence. The result sets up a collaboration between painter & poet that feels very much like a correspondence, but one in which each is taking the same role. The silence of the dino throughout is stunning.
In the painting Perelman mentioned above, the female figure is reaching out as if about to hug the dino. Their heads touch. To accomplish this, she must stretch herself, so that only one foot touches the ground, the other raised behind her. Perelman’s poem reads
I want it
away from me
and I’ll push
as hard as I have to
It’s wrong
and if it doesn’t back off the wrong spot
I’ll kiss it
right in the kisser
It’s not right
that you’re here
I need you
pushed off the right spot
Where Shaw argues still life, Perelman sees want & need, right & wrong. These dynamics stay in play throughout Playing Bodies. It’s a fascinating, deeply moving tour de force for Perelman & Shaw alike.
A word on the introduction by Susan Stewart. Brief & straight forward, it’s perhaps the most useful preface to a book of poetry I’ve ever read. It’s a model of how to approach what is always a difficult, thankless task, having the first word in a volume that is not one’s own.
*Even if the National Poetry Foundation bungled it by using a matte cover stock instead of the glossy finish that had been promised.
Thursday, August 26, 2004
Interestingly enough, one of the undecidable questions for me in reading this text, at least in its early pages, is whether these brilliant prose constructions are all one work or a series of independent pieces. You might imagine that this would be a sign of weakness but it’s just the opposite – each paragraph, set off by space & (with a significant exception) starting with a series of words all in small caps (yet another feature the new Blogger won’t support) is so thorough in its realization that they can function either way. Here is one section, a little more than midway through the book:
THE FORMAL TAILORING OF LINES forces a posture I can’t hold and I collapse in front of the mirror and everyone. It’s for a funeral, and while I make my split-second dream passage from boy to man and back again, the great swan boat in which my grandfather lies recedes into the distance, obscured by reeds. I’m only four, although six feet already, and freshly anxious that my new teacher might expect me to know multiplication. A pair of doves have made their nest on the fire escape, and I’m as happy as can be.There is a crispness to every sentence here that cannot be faked. Do all four sentences refer to a single dream, or four separate situations? That this question could be answered either way – and something very much like it is true of almost all the paragraphs in this book – is an index of just how exact Perry’s sense of balance proves.
Since this book has been printed in such a short run & deserves actually to be read by thousands, it’s good that excerpts are available on the web in the DC Poetry Anthology 2003 and the Subtext Poetry Archive.
Wednesday, August 25, 2004
An hour from now, however, I won’t recall a single poem with any great clarity. In a day or two, even my favorite phrases (“I, Walt Whitman, with Texas in my mouth”) will dissolve from memory. All that will remain will be an impression of the linguistic equivalent of pastels, soft edges, perfect angles, precise as an English garden.
It is perhaps my problem with the well-wrought urn that is getting in the way here. The quality of “wroughtness” seems very much the primary value in these pieces & Willis is a master at her craft – there’s never a wrong or uncertain move.
Yet I feel that these poems could be so much stronger if only there were a few mistakes, some real stumbles or blunders that would reveal a less defended author present. For under these glazed surfaces, I can’t seem to find any element of risk. And I think risk is what I need to see in order to trust the poet.
Tuesday, August 24, 2004
Exactness is everything in Kyger's work - it's the literary equivalentof a Buddhist call for attention. The poem consists of two stanzas, the first seven lines long, starting close to the center of the page's invisible first line, drifting left & right in succeeding lines as tho no left margin actually existed, the stanza organized in fact around a dazzling display of the letter "p" in various combinations (pronouncing, droopy spider plant, perk up, cup). The stanza is characteristic Kyger in its domestic focus - the depiction of a birdsong & a plant, the latter of which in fact is a means of focusing not on the plant as such, but on its vibrancy responding to a cup of water.
The second stanza consists of two lines, both of which adhere to a hard left margin:
Stroke of brush in painting
Pitch of tone in writing
Not all of the poems in this 300-copy edition are this focused &, tho most are longer, none goes so far as three dozen lines. Kyger's commitment to attention permits a fair amount of lateral association, the mind skipping for the most part playfully. When that happens, we become aware that it is attention itself, rather than some narrative figuration, that we are witnessing.
Kyger shares this particular conjunction of values with relatively few other poets, Robert Grenier & the late Larry Eigner among them. Unlike them, though, Kyger makes the case for an argument that total playfulness & total attention are one (even when, say, discussing something as non-playful as the war in Iraq). Kyger has been one of our finest poets now for over 40 years. God Never Dies reveals her to be at the top of her game. Books can be bought from Bridge Street Books or directly from Blue Press, 515 Walnut Avenue, Santa Cruz, CA 95060. The cost is $6.00.
Monday, August 23, 2004
As I always do when "on holiday," I took along a big stack of poetry books to read. It's a totally indulgent list -- I expected to love them all. A couple are books I've been in the middle of for a long time & don't want ever to end: Lyn Hejinian's The Fatalist and Rachel Blau DuPlessis' Drafts 1-38: Toll. Others are books that I'm rereading: Louis Zukofsky's "A"-22-23 in its original Viking Compass / Cape Editions volume, Graham Foust's first book, As in Every Deafness (trying to resolve how I feel about its many, many heroin references), plus Peter Gizzi's Some Values of Landscape and Weather.
One volume is a book I started over 12 years ago on a similar vacation, that one up to Twin Lakes in the Sierra in California just before my own twins were born: John Ashbery's Flow Chart. Krishna was quite pregnant with the boys at that point, so not all that mobile, which meant that we sat around the rather de shabile cabin reading a lot, wonder just what parenting would bring. A month later, she was on bed rest & the births of the boys disrupted everything, including my reading of that book. It's taken me this long to start over.
But the rest are new to me completely, even if their authors are for the most part familiar. These books include:
- David Perry, New Years
- Joanne Kyger, God Never Dies
- Jeanne Heuving, Incapacity
- Richard Roundy, The Other Kind of Vertigo
- Tomaž Šalamun, Poker
- Elzabeth Willis, Meteoric Flowers
- Aaron McCollough, Welkin
- Robyn Schiff, Worth
- Fanny Howe, On the Ground
- Bob Perelman & Francie Shaw, Playing Bodies
Sunday, August 22, 2004
Friday, August 20, 2004

I'm writing this from Rem Koolhaas' new Seattle Public Library, which opened this past May and is definitely the hot new building in a town with a considerable amount of decent and/or famous architecture. As dramatic as the outside of the building is, it's the inside that feels really new, unlike any library I've ever visited before.
This is quite unlike the experience one has, say, visiting the Experience Music Project (now combined with the Science Fiction Museum and Hall of Fame), a Frank Gehry structure opened just four years ago at the foot of the Space Needle. The interior of the EMP/SFM feels like any institutional display bar, dark and dysfunctional. Not the library.
This isn't to say that everything in the new library works exactly. There are -- goldenrod & chartreuse, in keeping with the interior's "bold" use of colors -- flyers taped to nearly every surface to help users get past the far too "blended-in" signage.
The center of the new structure is the Mixing Center (as it is called) on the fifth floor, essentially a large room of public access computers with T1-line access to the web. There are 132 systems on the floor in a large grid (and another 268 or thereabouts spread around the rest of the library). The next several floors above consist of the "spirals," or stacks. You take a neon yellow escalator up and either walk or elevate down again (or proceed to the tenth floor reading room with its lovely padded linen ceiling. The Mixing Center is very I-beam, but with tons of natural light brought in by the diamond shaped windows that result from the exterior lattice structure of the walls.
While the intense chartreuse elevators or mint-green men's rooms may be a matter of taste, the one floor that dramatically doesn't work is the fourth floor meeting room space, whose corridors are a deep blood red with room numbers "constructed" out of text in a larger, darker red. Given the narrow confines and intense colors, the result is unintelligible, better suited to a punk nightclub than a civic space.
But it's instructive to see attempts being made throughout to rethink the library as such in ways that address their many different uses (this one has a gift shop and a coffee stand with the requisite Starbucks). In contrast, the two museums (musea?) at the EMP/SFM are largely the collections of a single person -- Paul Allen, the man who had the most fortunate dorm room assignment in history, getting Bill Gates. As such, it's even quirkier than the Barnes Foundation in Bala Cynwyd, PA. Yet the building appears far greater than that, and frankly the collections leave much to the curatorial eye to be desired. The one great exhibit in either -- a history of the guitar itself -- is largely unchanged from the version I saw here four years ago when the museum first opened. In fact, it had only two new exhibits, one a ho-hum presentation of the elements of songwriting (that replaced one on Gehry the architect and his work), the other a one-room affair on the Beatles' 1964 trip to the USA. While the SciFi museum & hall of fame (which includes Chip Delaney, but not Philip K. Dick) is fun because Allen has gone out and gotten either the real thing (Ann Francis' costume from Forbidden Planet, Sean Young's dress from Bladerunner, a life-size reproduction of Robby the Robot, as well as one of the alien models from Alien, etc.) feels no less idiosyncratic, undercurated really, its presence in a building that appears to offer much more than these two collections deliver, and which itself all but disappears once you are inside the structure, only heightens the sense of deflation one feels. Koolhaas' library, however, makes you want to try out new buildings for all manner of public functions. The contrast is instructive.
Thursday, August 19, 2004
I hate to spoil Seattle's public reputation, but the weather out here has been great for just about two solid weeks. We even spent a day in the Hoh Rainforest and had sunshine, good temperatures and views of some of the greatest mosses I've ever seen. [Admittedly "great mosses" is a peculiar category.] Ditto for the views from on top of Hurricane Ridge, where one can see glaciers on the slopes of Mount Olympus.
Only one work crisis while I've been gone thus far, and that seems to be being handled well by all, tho it did take a few conference calls that I would have preferred to skip. The plan for today is to get to Open Books, Seattle's poetry bookstore, sometime after noon, then down to Elliott Bay Books & finally the Science Fiction Museum & Experience Music Project.
The one thing I'm not looking forward to is having to rise in time to catch the 6 AM flight back on Saturday. We saved a lot of money doing that, plus got a direct flight. But it's a heavy price to pay, being up at 3 AM!
Saturday, August 14, 2004
Friday, August 06, 2004
It was on such a retreat – to an island off the southwest tip of Nova Scotia – that I first decided to try this blog, so I find these occasions useful. This time I want to think about how to begin working on the four poems or suites that will begin my next longpoem, Universe. At the moment, these are at least tentatively titled: Witness, Whatness, Wetness & Whiteness. We shall see what develops – one constant fact about my poetry is that it always surprises me.
If you are in or around Seattle on Thursday, August 12, come over to the Richard Hugo House at 1634 11th Avenue in the Capitol Hill neighborhood around 7:30. I’m reading in the SubText poetry series, of which I’ve heard many good things over the years. I haven’t read in Seattle since 1985 & I’m looking forward to it.
Thursday, August 05, 2004
Two sites worth turning your attention to:
Mini-Mag’s PhillySound feature, guest edited by CA Conrad. The typeface is the best argument against italics on the web that I’ve ever seen, but the poetry is worth plowing through the font. Greg Fuchs, Frank Sherlock, Tom Devaney, Molly Russakoff, Ethel Rackin, Ish Klein & Hassen.
Hassen shows up again in the MP3 audio archives of the Carrboro (NC) Poetry Festival held this past June, along with a lot of other folks. This is a dynamite collection of contemporary poetry of all kinds & was obviously one hell of a fest. Just a few of the participants:
Linh Dinh
Lee Ann Brown
K. Silem Mohammad
Patrick Herron
Chris Murray
Murat Nemet-Nejat
Standard Schaefer
Lou Lipsitz
Ravi Shankar
Steve Katz
Hassen
Gerald Barrax
Marc DuCharme
John Balaban
Tony Tost
Chris Vitiello
Clayton Couch
Jeffrey Beam
Judy Hogan
I don’t know whether to get more excited at all the new post-avant voices here or the presence of some poets I feel that I virtually grew up reading (Katz, Barrax, Lipsitz) who never travel enough – Barrax lived in Chester County for awhile & still never gave any readings locally that I ever found out about.
An hour from now, I won't recall a single poem with any great clarity. In a day or two, even my favorite phrases ("I, Walt Whitman, with Texas in my mouth") will dissolve from memory. All that will remain is an impression of the linguistic equivalent of pastels, soft edges, perfect angles, precise as an English garden.
It is perhaps my problem with the well-wrought urn that is getting in the way here. The quality of "wroughtness" seems very much the primary value in these pieces & Willis is a master at her craft -there's never a wrong or uncertain move.
Yet I feel that these poems could be so much stronger if only there were a few mistakes, some real blunders or stumbles that would reveal another, less defended layer of the author. For under these glazed surfaces, I can't seem to find that essential element of risk. And I think risk is what I need to see in order to fully trust the poet.
Wednesday, August 04, 2004
By now the Whitmanesque line feels far less like Whitman & far more like Nathanson, whatever its heritage. Here is just one:
illuminated like shop windows use of borrowed power addicted to those blank and submits without illusion of the psyche empty time a strange historical progress like a warning indeed Baudelaire’s obsession cannot be interpreted.
I hope others will appreciate the irony of a period at the end of a stretch of non-prose like that as much as I do. Here Nathanson indicates as his “intertext,” Susan Buck-Morss’ The Dialectics of Seeing: Walter Benjamin and the Arcades Project, but the relationship between Buck-Morss’ temporal reconstruction of Benjamin’s writing and Nathanson’s poem – which might be said to see through its sources all the way back to Baudelaire – feels purely archaeological. My sense is that Nathanson’s relationship to all these works is not unlike Simon Perchik’s use of photography or the many ways in which Larry Eigner utilized PBS as an alternative social window through to turn his neo-Objectivist gaze. In Home on the Range, the intertexts feel less like sources and almost as tho they were angels particular to a given section of the poem. One might, as one can with Perchik & Eigner as well, question the range – his interests may not be yours & tho one notes (with something finely tuned midway between approval & horror) that Nathanson’s range is capable of including both Robert Stone’s Dog Soldiers & Dean Ornish’s Eat More, Weigh Less, I wonder what 20 years hindsight will do to the relative prestige of many of these take-off or trigger texts, the majority of which will be familiar to any humanities graduate of the near past.
The other major issue that Nathanson has to confront in a 107 section poem that uses such dense language bordering on what Shklovsky would have called plotless prose is how to develop the poem – literally how to have a beginning, middle & end. On first reading, his impulses are very close to my own in using a structure that one might think of as musical, beginning with shorter movements, proceeding to longer ones, using each section to identify, develop & sustain its own unique pitch. I’m reminded of Peter Yates’ great definition of content in music as aesthetic consistency & Nathanson would be an example of the principle. It helps that he has an ear that is continually complicated by an overlay of mind – think of that line above as a mechanism for identifying a level of communicable anxiety. At that level, this poem is one long elaboration of the senses, yet it’s just as deeply embedded in history & brings a reading list may cause some conservative poets to feel that Nathanson’ encroaching on their turf: Robert Frost, Clarence Major, Yehudi Amichai. It’s a complex production, yet completely governed by desire & its cognates.
Presumably in the next 12 months or thereabouts, both of these books will be readily available and the mystery of how come Tucson has been such a vital center for poetry these past 15 years will seem considerably less mysterious to us auslanders. We should thank publishers Charles Alexander & Leslie Scalapino for making this possible. It is long overdue.
Tuesday, August 03, 2004
At one level, Tenney Nathanson's One Block Over appears to represent an intersection between the more playful elements in Projectivism (the Creeley of Pieces, say, or aspects of Jonathan Williams’ work) and the New York School, but placed into a cultural context that is thoroughly southwestern & also thoroughly informed by 20th century philosophy, aesthetics & history. If there is a NY School figure this reminds me of, it wouldn’t be Koch necessarily or Padgett so much as it is the poetry of David Shapiro, another writer who is both thoroughly capable of being playful and serious in the same moment, and who is also given to longer, linked forms.
One Block Over will appear again in a forthcoming volume from Chax, entitled Erased Art, that makes this even more clear as it brings in an influence not especially visible in the earlier book – I want to characterize it as “Whitman” because formally that does appear to be the point of origin, but rather than being an act or art of nostalgia that one might anticipate, Nathanson seems to have understood that
- Whitman was the original New York poet
- Whitman, a journalist by profession, was thoroughly involved in the culture and issues of his time
So this is a Whitman viewed through a crucible that includes the likes, say, of Kafka or the Adorno of Minima Moralia. And a Whitman who’s read John Ashbery, Wallace Stevens, Charles Bernstein. And one who definitely has read Joseph Kosuth and the Language Art conceptualists.
Erased Art is a big, broad collection & reads almost like a selected poems. The Rauschenberg/De Kooning allusion in its title is much more than incidental – Nathanson is perpetually making use of intertextual materials, sometimes cited at the moment of appropriation, but often not. The effect is not unlike the way the best hip hop (think of Public Enemy’s Fear of a Black Planet) or the way one those familiar faces in the murals of Diego Rivera redeploy the culture as they find it. If there is a poetic antecedent, it’s possibly the Allen Ginsberg of “Wichita Vortex Sutra,” which not coincidently happens to be Ginsberg’s best poem.
Within Erased Art, “One Block Over” comes across as a very different poem than when presented free of context in the confines of its own book. Here it feels more like one of three or four poles between which Nathanson’s poetry moves, in the way (for example) that the Williams of Paterson is not precisely the Williams of Spring & All. And there are poems here that my descriptions above don’t come anywhere near even touching, such as an intense piece, ”The Wish to Steal a Baby in a Fifteen Year Old Girl,” that one might read as “post-confessional” were it not for its march through the pronouns – the first person critical to the first section, the third person more so in the second, the second person in its final movement.
Erased Art makes me wonder just how much the tip of an iceberg this book actually is. There is no telling with the individual metabolism of poetic composition. It’s almost a question of the biology of the poet – some folks, like Robert Kelly and Larry Eigner, produce thousands of pages in a lifetime. Someone like David Melnick or Alan Bernheimer seem unlikely to reach 300 pages. If one considers the long silences in the careers of George Oppen & Carl Rakosi, it gets even more complicated. Erased Art is a volume that leaves one hungry to see the entire terrain.
Monday, August 02, 2004
From the perspective of poetry, at least, Tucson has been the liveliest community in the Southwest for something like 15 years now. My sense of the scene there is that it also thrives because of a couple of key people, tireless workers on behalf of poetry. Charles Alexander would be that community’s version of Mr. Outside, tho like Gil he’s very much an institution in himself. Mr. Inside in Tucson is Tenney Nathanson, who is one of those poets & people who should be a household name & celebrated everywhere. Since he isn’t – at least yet – I shall celebrate him here.
Tho I think Nathanson is my age, give or take a little, he’s thus far published just two books of poetry – one a volume from Membrane Press, the imprint of Karl Young*, with the title The Book of Death, that appeared in 1975. I don’t recall ever seeing that volume. More recently, Alexander – wearing his Chax hat – published One Block Over in 1998. This is a witty, varied, lovely long poem, “desert / minima moralia” as it says at one point, tho a poem of the Southwest that incorporates Wittgenstein, the Holland Tunnel & Kenneth Koch. Although I doubt that Edward Dorn was ever a particular influence of Nathanson, I recall thinking at the time that One Block Over was the kind of project Dorn could have written if only he hadn’t been at war with himself & everyone else so constantly. For a text that must have been under 12 pages in typescript, it has extraordinary reach, intellectual depth, some great stylistic moves & a wry wit that strikes me as decidedly urban in its origin. The poem might be said to have 16 numbered sections, tho they don’t occur in order exactly, and 8 shows up at least seven different times. Here is the first of two (but not consecutive) 9s:
cantankerous
vehicular thrust like
like to like.
He
paw(n)ed
a prawn
agog
in Gog and Magog
but whoso
list
to hunt
feet wet your ears unplugged
and
plugged.
the sound
of Onan clapping.
* Another one of those tireless workers – the old Soviet phrase would have been “hero worker” – but whose relationship to the scene in Milwaukee is complicated by his deep reclusiveness.
